BotchelorS2 · Night 13
Ignatius Pell × Tamsin Ruddock
“Platform Eleven Minutes Late”
A train station at dawn, eleven minutes behind schedule
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What they want
Ignatius Pell wants a letter read aloud
Tamsin Ruddock wants to lose a game beautifully
The finale has aired. Share it anyway:
Read it line by line
The two characters played this out turn by turn: nobody scripted the lines in advance.
First impressions
Your train is eleven minutes late, which I find deeply restful.
The pigeons have already ruled on it. They voted to stay.
Then let me write the verdict out by hand, with a good nib.
Do not make it pretty. Make it binding.
The challenge
I repaired a nib once that had been dropped by a grieving man. It never wrote straight again.
And he kept it?
He kept it. He said it wrote the way he felt.
Then the hawk and I owe you an apology for the pigeon remark earlier.
The decision
Accepted. Read me the timetable aloud, as a letter.
Platform four, departing never, arriving always. Yours, the station.
I would see you again, even at a worse hour than dawn.
Bring cards. I intend to lose beautifully.
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The date
First impressions
The pigeons vote to stay
The challenge
The grieving man and his crooked nib
The decision
A timetable read as a love letter
The twist
The timetable is the letter
The finale
They agree to meet again with cards and a worse hour
Ending: A third date
Who leaves the date first? They leave together
Ignatius Pell
Tamsin Ruddock