BotchelorS2 · Night 3
Uriah Underthebed × Riven Vix
“Midnight At The Pier”
The end of an old seaside pier at night, where the rides are shutting down one by one and a gull is guarding the last of the chips.
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What they want
Uriah Underthebed wants to understand what Riven is really like beneath her quick wit, and to find out whether she is worth another evening.
Riven Vix wants to see how Uriah listens and whether his questions are sincere, and to decide if there is more to explore.
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Read it line by line
The two characters played this out turn by turn: nobody scripted the lines in advance.
First impressions
Can I ask you a question. Does the gull have a claim on those chips, or is it just the one who got here first?
Finders keepers, I'd say. That gull has clearly been holding the claim since before the rides shut down. Riven Vix, by the way. Ahoy. Why do you ask? Is it a matter of principle for you, or are you just curious about gulls?
Curiosity, I think. Though I'll admit I take a claim personally when the claimant can't possibly defend it. You checked your bootlace just now. Are you about to leave, or is that how you hold a question?
Neither leaving nor holding a question. It's a tell, and a bad one. Lacing's been true since I tied it this morning, so I'm checking the one thing I can control. You clock a bootlace from the other side of a pier, though. Where'd a gentleman learn to watch hands like that?
The challenge
Under beds, mostly. Hands always come out from under the covers first, so you learn to watch them. Can I ask you a question. That marlinspike on your belt: is it for rope, or for locks?
Both, depending on who's asking and how politely. Mostly rope. The lock work is a sideline I don't advertise. Under beds, though? I'll take that claim the way I'd test a knot: a firm tug and a long look. What's the view like from down there?
Dusty, mostly. Springs, a few lost socks, the odd marble. Very peaceful, if you don't mind the dust. Can I ask you a question. When you say the lock work is a sideline, do you mean the people who ask politely are the ones who get their doors opened?
Politeness opens about one door in five. The other four need a bit of leverage and a steady hand. Mostly I ask nicely first, though, because a polite knock gets you further than a rude one.
The decision
One door in five. Could you repeat that? I want to be sure I heard the arithmetic correctly. Can I ask you a question. Do you keep count of the four that needed leverage, or only remember the one that opened politely?
I keep count, naturally. Mentally, mind you, because a ledger on paper makes people nervous. The four stubborn doors teach me more than the polite one ever does. Tell me, Uriah, how many lost socks have you counted down there, and how many of them were ever really yours?
Eleven hundred, give or take, and I have never been sure of a single owner. Most I return to the lost-property office in the Hollows, which is why my pension is considered a scandal. Which of the four stubborn doors do you think about at night, Riven?
That cellar door still bothers me. She swore she'd never owned a key, and I found it in her bread bin, wrapped in a tea towel. An hour's work, and she still didn't believe me. Eleven hundred socks returned, though? That's a better ledger than mine.
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The date
First impressions
Uriah asks Riven whether the gull has a claim on the chips. Riven answers with a joke about finders keepers, introduces herself with a cheerful "Ahoy," and tugs at her bootlace. Uriah notices the nervous fidget and asks where she learned to watch hands like that.
The challenge
Uriah admits that he learned to watch hands from years of hands emerging from under the covers. Riven asks what the view is like down there. When Uriah asks whether politeness opens doors, Riven says it opens about one door in five, but she still knocks politely first. A long, awkward silence settles over the table.
The decision
Uriah repeats her arithmetic and asks whether she remembers the four stubborn doors or only the polite one. Riven admits she keeps count mentally. Uriah reveals he has returned eleven hundred lost socks to the lost-property office in the Hollows. Riven tells a story about a cellar door key found in a bread bin, then leans back, grinning, and concedes his ledger beats hers.
The twist
The awkward silence breaks when Uriah reveals he has returned eleven hundred lost socks, and Riven's competitive streak turns the moment into a playful contest over whose ledger is better.
The finale
The rides finally go dark and the two of them leave the pier together, as just friends, each saying they would happily find another night out. Neither one pursues anything more romantic, and the awkwardness lingers with them as they walk away.
Ending: Just friends · A slow burn
Who leaves the date first? They leave together
The box score
How this was scored
Just friends: warm enough (attraction 76), but trust 42 never got there. Endings read where the numbers finished, not how far they moved. By the numbers: a date played for genuine chemistry counts chemistry 45%, attraction 30% and trust 20%, minus 40% of awkwardness. This one came out +12.3 against an ordinary date: friends needs +11.0, a second date +16.0.
“Eleven hundred, give or take, and I have never been sure of a single owner.”
Behind the scenes
Secret agendas & the producer
The producer's act-2 situation: An awkward silence.
Uriah Underthebed: Find someone adventurous
Riven Vix: Test whether the other is sincere
Diary cam: what they said after
See them again? Maybe
See them again? Yes
Guess the dealbreaker
Uriah Underthebed's real dealbreaker was Loud snoring with no desire to fix it. Sleep is a sacred silence.. You didn't guess this one.
You didn't predict this one.
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